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Post by Darkness (Umbreon) on Sun Nov 30, 2014 4:21 pm

Now my turn.
It's not too detailed, it shows what she can do, it shows her friendships, but where is the story? It seems to lack. 5/10

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Re: Seriously outdated; Would ignore.

Post by Jolty the Jolteon on Sun Nov 30, 2014 4:43 pm

Life lacks stories. I'm in life. Life is evil. OMG CRAZY CONSPIRACY TIEMMMM
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Post by Jolty the Jolteon on Sun Nov 30, 2014 4:44 pm

Other than that, I completely agree, it would be SO much better with a backstory. I only had like, 5 minutes at the time before I had to go, so I completely winged it.
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Re: Seriously outdated; Would ignore.

Post by Darkness (Umbreon) on Sun Nov 30, 2014 4:45 pm

That's fine, always time to improve! Smile

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Post by Jolty the Jolteon on Sun Nov 30, 2014 4:45 pm

Haha, yea.
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Re: Seriously outdated; Would ignore.

Post by mariosonicepic123 on Mon Dec 01, 2014 12:21 am

Don't forget me c:<
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Post by Dragonite99 on Wed Dec 03, 2014 8:39 pm

it's simple and effective! :3
it explains Jolty in a mere couple of sentences
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