Sabre the Manectric OC AND a bonus storms oc woaho

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Sabre the Manectric OC AND a bonus storms oc woaho

Post by Sabre on Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:25 pm

Sabre is your average Manectric, wearing an Australian hat and accent and hailing from Kalos. Normal! He's also the reincarnation of Link or
something
RANDOM youthoughtidsaychihiro's ALTER EGO
French Sabre- Ooh la la, slip on a beret and bam! French.
CHARACTER TRAITS
Brave and crap, but kinda dumb.
FRIENDS
Storms (Ninetales)
Bolt (Manectric) I guess
Tour probably (not)
FAMILY
Mom- Sword
Dad- Scimitar
Sister- Katana
no frikkin wife umg
NOW FOR STORMS
Well his family rejected him because he loves water and his sister Sunny is his worst enemy, yeah.
TRAITS
Really smart and tends to follow what everyone else thinks
FRIENDS
BlazeTales
Sabre (Manectric)
Fritz (Typhlosion) I assume?
FAMILY
Unknown father (spooky)
Unknown mother (also spooky)
Sunny (Sister) aka living hell
OTHER INFO I GUESS?
well he has blue eyes
he knows the song of storms
and he's probably the reincarnation of Zelda...
...probably
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Re: Sabre the Manectric OC AND a bonus storms oc woaho

Post by AxeBane on Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:42 pm

E-erm... Honestly, when I look at this description for your character, it's organised in such a way that really makes me not want to read it fully... Perhaps you should take a look at others' layouts, or hell, use my own template.

Honestly, to me -- and I mean no offense by this -- it just seems as if you haven't put much effort into the creation of this little biography... Maybe contact me when you read this, and I'll walk you through how to properly make one, 'ey? I see potential, but it just isn't really showing at the moment.
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Re: Sabre the Manectric OC AND a bonus storms oc woaho

Post by Sabre on Sun Nov 30, 2014 5:54 pm

Oh crap, you made a template?!
Time to rework everything

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Post by LinkTheLeafeon on Sun Dec 21, 2014 1:27 am

I Rate 8/10, little more of a Backstory. Things that I like: The LoZ refs, Sunny(Sister) aka living Hell, The weapons as family, and more XD
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