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My OC Please Rate!

Post by Dragon555 on Sun Feb 28, 2016 3:04 pm

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qwLRUZaciYD7rxBC2oKSKCgvWZdjufDdWxeMs_qqmsw/edit
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Re: My OC Please Rate!

Post by 13InHeaven on Tue Mar 01, 2016 5:51 am

Dragon555 wrote:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qwLRUZaciYD7rxBC2oKSKCgvWZdjufDdWxeMs_qqmsw/edit

A small question for the mods:
Are fanmade items/(mega) evo's even allowed? >Typhlosionite

Then i'll look on.
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Re: My OC Please Rate!

Post by Cruella on Wed Mar 02, 2016 6:03 am

They seem fairly interesting, however, the plot lines are rather predictable in my point of view. I also think you should change the name from dragon and dragolandia(Purely my opinion, others might disagree) as they seem just a little too... basic? Also I will just mention that I think you change genders of Dragon half-way through. Correct me if I am wrong. Oh and the random capitals gets to me. But what I really think is nice about this is the connection the three share. I always enjoy reading about connected ocs, I think it makes it more interesting. This is all just my opinion, and good job so far.
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Re: My OC Please Rate!

Post by Kyuss on Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:13 am

I guess this is a bit... weird? I've seen people roleplaying as Pokémon, Trainers, Swordsman, etc... But, as dragons of other game? I think the idea is fine, I won't disrupt you. I only have 2 things to say about... First, I will change the ''Typhlosionite''. Second, you should work more in the document.

The idea is fine, I guess... Good job.

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