Serena (Lopunny) < OC

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Serena (Lopunny) < OC

Post by Serena(Lopunny) on Mon Mar 07, 2016 8:39 am

Ok, um. . . after a lot of. . . thinking, I figured, I should probably just post my OC's bio. So, here it is. . .
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DRY_JIjzvE0RUnUKkOdPly0t_dP3v2kNDaAAtS6G42c/edit

THIS DOCUMENT HAS BEEN DELETED. AKA THIS IS NOT SERENA'S OC DOCUMENT ANYMORE. A DIFFERENT VERSION OF THIS DOC WILL BE POSTED SOON.


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Re: Serena (Lopunny) < OC

Post by FluffyDeoxys on Mon Mar 07, 2016 6:34 pm


Woah, nice biography! I'd suggest more subtle colours and maybe variating fonts? Feel free to shoot me a PM if you'd like some assistance, but this looks wonderful~ Though I'm unsure the inclusion of a legendary is allowed, but best refer to the "authorities", heheh. I'd love to RP with her sometime~
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Post by Shuffle The Ampharos on Tue Mar 08, 2016 2:55 am


While it's more of the same "oc was born parents died became really strong" cliche, it's a really nice bio ignoring that. Also please remove the black outline around the backstory. I can feel my eyes melting.
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Post by Serena(Lopunny) on Tue Mar 08, 2016 6:10 am

Thanks~ Lmao, k, I will remove the black highlight. xD




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