Vita, Muori, and Imasu.

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Vita, Muori, and Imasu.

Post by Tenuis on Mon Mar 14, 2016 3:55 pm

Hey, Tenuis here.

So, I've created three OCs, a Sneasel, a Snorunt, and a Zorua. Vita is for the Sneasel, Muori is for the Snorunt, and Imasu is for the Zorua. Vita means life, while Muori means death. They basically balance each other out. They're both sisters, with Vita being older, and grew up, and continue to grow up, together. Now, I won't go into both of their backstories, because I have docs, but hopefully this is just a simple outline so that you can get the picture.

Imasu is just... There? Lol, I'm not sure what to put. But check out the backstories if you'd like! (Please?)

And, yes, I am aware that this sounds edgy. But please give it a chance. c:

Vita: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Jx7oMFSgVSZXyClA4DUFF3g3SnKC3lngix12ZlwrDDQ/edit

Muori: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h3_LIR5-D5NZskVNW8Qy1LGGg0e3cI5D4LqvgDO_HY4/edit

Imasu: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rM8zCV-U3FtaU-cpi1wp9bYoUpa6AL3y5TPoqpNGqQQ/edit

Anyway, that's it. Have a nice day, and tell me your thoughts!


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Re: Vita, Muori, and Imasu.

Post by Samtendo09 on Tue Mar 15, 2016 3:50 pm

Your two OCs are well opposed and developed, but I got a feeling that Muori would be a villainess at anytime if never she would ever betray Vita (or if Vita cannot take her anymore, or any circonstances that they broke up), and also by the fact she never want any friends at all and liking death, violence and even pain, making her a potential villain when I would use her (which is unlikely but just saying).

Keep up the good work with them though.
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