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OC's Yay. Just rate it.

Post by GameBox on Sun Mar 27, 2016 1:36 pm

Name: Game (FR OC.)

Goals: Completing His PokeDex, generic Becoming the Strongest Trainer

Age: 19

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{Height: 4'11
{Coloring, Eyes: Brown Hair: Brown (Long.)

Personality: Witty, Impactiant, Independent

Backstory: Game's Parents run a Daycare. When Game was 13 they gave Game a Pokémon egg. then, he became a trainer. He now Travels around training his Pokémon to be the very best, like no one ever was.
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Re: OC's Yay. Just rate it.

Post by Mana (S~Gardevoir) on Wed Mar 30, 2016 6:11 am

I'd say to make a bio around him, on Google Docs. Really just to elaborate more on exactly what he's like. What was in the pokemon egg? When did he decide to become a trainer? Who'd he get the Pokedex from? Y'know, just more stuff like that. Right now, I'd say it's a 3/10 because... well. It's barely a skeleton at this point. I'm certainly not saying it's a bad concept, but... well. There just needs to be more. 3/10, it'd be good fleshed out.
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