Spirit & Voltaire!

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Spirit & Voltaire!

Post by Dragon555 on Thu Jun 16, 2016 11:53 am

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oh80KWPZBNrQ6srkeJsT2qmwak-9X1MoxLnLEFj4-Jk/edit

2 new OCs! What do you guys think? Oh yeah, not fully finished though :/
Anyways... What do you think of the Potential as Spirit and Voltarie Join the fight!
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Re: Spirit & Voltaire!

Post by Candiies on Sat Jun 18, 2016 1:22 am

Well. In terms of what you already have down on the doc, you should expand in the history of the item that both Spirit and Voltaire hold, or even just what purpose the serve, since they're not real items.

Also, for Spirit, you should tell us which route 1 he was born on, since I think there are two or three different versions for their respective regions.

Lastly-- this is just an opinion or suggestion, but you might want to separate their tables, just so it's easier to tell who's who. Otherwise, I hope to see it finished (with a bio and personality desc?)!
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