The world of laidana

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The world of laidana

Post by Kevinselvan on Sun Mar 19, 2017 10:42 am

Ok first of to clear things up
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f9LSBKMytzkLFkkQmI5SFs8uP4zTAY_bdDTif9aTABs/edit
The world of laidana
This is a dnd that i made.
And it is one of my very first rp's to ever receive active participation

But i can't seem to figure out why.
This is where i need help
Guys i need to figurew out what is good and what is bad about this
I am looking at people who are great critics, or have played this...

Also i would like to know how i can improve on this...like the design and what not

Thanks in advance
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