Blade the Scolipede

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Blade the Scolipede

Post by KFCutman on Sat Dec 06, 2014 9:02 am

Blade is a strong, hard willed hero ready to crush his enemies and help his allies.
Name: Blade
Species: Scolipede
Ability: Speed Boost
Moveset:
Toxic
Megahorn
Venom Drench
Protect

Held Item: None

Allies and Enemies
( a  drunken icon next to a character means that they are confirmed dead)
Younes the Scizor: Brother
drunken Aqua(Mantine): Rival of Blade.
Aqua(S.Mantyke): Re-incarnation of Aqua, much more friendlier.
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Items and Gifts
Toxic TM(NPC)
Eviolite(Younes the Scizor)

Backstory:

Born near a river side with a clan of Scolipede who spoiled Blade rotten. As Blade grew stronger, the clan was attacked more often. The small Venipede was blessed by Arceus to have his hidden ability. The Venipede soon became a Whirlipede, and soon obliterated every attacker in his path. Weaviles who stole eggs were flattened by a steamroller Attack, Beedrills cowarded in fear of this Whirlipede, and he has yet to win against a legendary.

EDIT: I forgot that Whilipede has evolved


Last edited by KFCutman on Sun Dec 21, 2014 1:36 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Blade the Scolipede

Post by ZinogreVolt on Sun Dec 07, 2014 4:26 am

A few things you could improve are that the backstory just hands your characters things, have him go through some hardships or have him go through some more story driven things, rather than the cliché "village was attacked". Another route you could take is giving him a more simplistic backstory, with something driving him to become the character he is now.
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