My OC, Aerial! Not Sandwich master 21!

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My OC, Aerial! Not Sandwich master 21!

Post by Divine Aerial-Noivern on Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:02 pm

Aerial Noivern!
Based on That-Douche-Character-Cliché. I was inspired by my annoyed side,  Cool
And I like Noivern.

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Age: 13
Height 4'8"
Weight 70.1 KG
Likes: Attention, Food, Success
Dislikes: Failure, Being Bored, Thirsty.

Friends: [New OC]
Enemies: [New OC]

Personality: Likes to have an advantage, but not too smart. Quite cocky and douche-like. Mostly smiling, with a cliché smirk.
What keeps Aerial from being Cliché 2014-15 is humour. Aerial is extremely humorous. But tends to swear a lot.

So leave a comment about the OC! I don't mind critical-size!  bounce
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Re: My OC, Aerial! Not Sandwich master 21!

Post by Manakete Morgan on Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:15 pm

I like the things you added, but I feel like you're missing a few things. Critical things. Like gender, perhaps? Anyway, you did a pretty good job on this and I actually rather like what you've done with your character. So to you, sir. You get...
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Re: My OC, Aerial! Not Sandwich master 21!

Post by Nekis13 on Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:30 pm

I can't tell if the OC is a joke or not by all the 'cliche' thing.

But, Oh well. It seems good, just try adding a little more data, 7/10
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Re: My OC, Aerial! Not Sandwich master 21!

Post by MeatNoob on Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:58 pm

Would prefer more details, and more clarification on what gender it is. Maybe a description of what the OC looks like, if you can't provide a picture.
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Re: My OC, Aerial! Not Sandwich master 21!

Post by Darkness (Umbreon) on Sat Nov 29, 2014 5:56 am

Looks alright, but yeah. We need the gender, maybe a bit of a backstory? I dunno, just a suggestion.

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