Pokemon Conquest Fanfiction :3

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Post by Styxian on Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:44 pm

http://pastebin.com/xEH8UhSh

This is the first chapter of my Pokemon Conquest fanfiction, all the characters are people from the roleplay room. Criticism is encouraged :3
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Post by Volteli on Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:10 pm

Well, shit.

I'm halfway through chapter one of a conquest-esque story.

Anyway, looks good so far. Would recommend a bit more spacing between paragraphs, easier on the eye.

I hope you don't mind it if I carry on with mine, it is first person and set through the eyes of a Ghost lord. Spoiler, I guess.
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