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Please rate my new OC

Post by Lefty The Mawile on Fri Jan 23, 2015 8:50 am

Hey i'm gonna share this Bio, pls rate it
http://bit.ly/15DAsQD
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Re: Please rate my new OC

Post by HanakoK on Wed Feb 25, 2015 3:47 pm

On a whole, it sounds great. However, the "murder session" part of the backstory is a bit confusing. Perhaps you should tell more about that.

I'd rate it 6/10
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