OC: Benjamin (Boldore)

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OC: Benjamin (Boldore)

Post by Aker-Sama on Sat Nov 29, 2014 12:30 am

Name: Benjamin
Species: Boldore (Roggenrola sometimes)
Age: Early 20's, physically
Notable Traits: Snarks at anything he finds odd, "For Science!" outlook on life, Being a Gag Fly.

Friends: Milly (Piplup), Axel Le Lucario, Rebound (F. Scizor)
Foes: Dewgong29, Jade Apocalipse
Family: Crumbs-Flareon (Son-In-Law)

Rock-types don't exactly have the best reputation when it comes to intelligence; All muscle, no wit, that's what the stereotype was in Western Unova. But this not the case with Benjamin, a young rock who, even as a child, aspired to be remembered as something more than just a hard object to throw at people. Despite the crippling handicap of having no arms, Benjamin swiftly became the most intelligent Pokemon in Twist Mountain, earning him the ire of his manlier brethren. He didn't mind being outcast though, more time to himself to improve his knowledge of the world. By the time he left the mountain as a fully-grown Boldore, he held the intellect of a Pokemon thrice his age, and the common sense of anyone half it. Across kingdoms, forests, and mystery dungeons, Benjamin's goal never changed, to become something beyond what his lesser loved kind strived for.

"Well, if you ask me, beauty is the eye of the beholder. Too bad to all beholders, I'm just a geeky rock with 3-stubby legs."
-Benjamin on his outlook on life.

Theme of Benjamin


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Re: OC: Benjamin (Boldore)

Post by MeatNoob on Sat Nov 29, 2014 12:51 am

Pretty nice and fluid (ironic for a rock) description.
9/10, pretty chill.
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Re: OC: Benjamin (Boldore)

Post by Hada (Sylveon) on Sat Nov 29, 2014 8:50 am

I like this, nice story for the Boldore. I would give it at least 8/10
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Re: OC: Benjamin (Boldore)

Post by Penelope Skie on Sat Nov 29, 2014 9:54 am

Lovely OC. But, even though it's obvious, you shouldn't forget the basis of Gender. After all, gender-confusion exists. I'd give it a 8/10.

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