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My OC Please Rate!

Post by NaotoraIi-Plz on Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:21 pm

Naotora (Flareon)
A regular colored female Flareon with Torn Ears
Notable Features: Bladed Boots on her back Paws and her torn ears
Personality: Naotora, Like Most Fire types has a passionate fighting spirit, however at the same time she hates hurting other Pokemon. Off the battle field Naotora is a Kind but sometimes Shy Pokemon. She is often Seen Sitting by herself in a corner or something.
Likes:
Food: Pecha Berries
Items: Her Bladed boots


Last edited by NaotoraIi-Plz on Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:54 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Not enough info)
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Re: My OC Please Rate!

Post by Growlly on Sun Feb 01, 2015 7:48 pm

I'll give it a 5/10. Try putting a backstory! Smile but otherwise, it's pretty cool!
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Re: My OC Please Rate!

Post by Angeliex on Sat Feb 21, 2015 9:50 pm

Hello
An interesting Original Character, if I were to give it a score out of 10 it would have to be a 6
As Calix said above, it needs a bit of Backstory and a bit more detail
A backstory, for example, could be centered around why her ear is torn.
Other than that, it seems pretty good.
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Re: My OC Please Rate!

Post by HanakoK on Wed Feb 25, 2015 3:32 pm

Like Angeliex and Calix both said, this could use more backstory. Also you said she has bladed boots on her back paws and torn ears... so she wears boots on her ears confused

Another thing, is her personality contradicts itself too much.

I give this a 4/10.
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