Gizmo the Umbreon

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Gizmo the Umbreon

Post by Berry -SimiSage on Fri Feb 27, 2015 10:34 pm

Gizmo is an Umbreon who has the power to tap into his full power by touching the stone on his necklace.
He is usually quiet and reserved, and is not ashamed to run from a fight he knows he cant win.
Gizmo also has a hard time making new friends, because of his lack of social skills, Though when he is around people he is comfortable with, he is bright and ecstatic.

Backstory: Gizmo grew up living a simple life, but that all changed when two humans started a forest fire and killed his father. His mother although alive, was taking her last breathes. She infused her soul into the necklace he wore, dying as she did so.


Age- 17
Gender- Male
Appearance- Is average size, though has an extra ring on his tail and ears.

Moves:
Dark Pulse
Crunch
Protect
MoonLight

Gizmo's stone has to ability to boost dark type moves, giving Gizmo the strength to take down much larger opponents.
Gizmo loves to eat berries, as his main hobby is picking and planting berries.

^-^ I also drew Gizmo, if youd like to see him go to    www.imgur.com/9YUL0IY


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Re: Gizmo the Umbreon

Post by The Penguinari of Sweg on Sat Feb 28, 2015 8:43 pm

I like your drawing skills. ^.^ 291123399.112% better than my non-existent ones.

Well, unfortunately, I don't have much to say about this one. I like that he's willing to back down, at least, and he seems like an interesting person. The lack of backstory troubles me, however.

Overall, I think there's a lot of potential.
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Re: Gizmo the Umbreon

Post by HanakoK on Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:09 pm

I like this, but the backstory could be expounded on.  Did he ever find out where his mother got the necklace?

You have good drawing skills Like a Star @ heaven

I give it a 6 out of 10, mainly because the backstory isn't much.
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