A new encounter: Edward Da Squirtle!

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A new encounter: Edward Da Squirtle!

Post by Edward Da Squirtle on Sat Mar 21, 2015 8:46 am

Hello! I'm Edward, not that Squirtle! I'm preeety young, but i love pokémon! I'm a boy, in case you don't know, and i love RP!
I've made a new character, based on my favorite pokemon!
Here it is:
1. He is very sad, after his parents had to let him alone, beaucuse of Team Rocket
2. He is a genius! Thanks to the Squirt-a-School!
3. He. Likes. I mean not. Chocolate
4. His moveset (WaterGun,Bite,Hydro Pump and Tackle) is simple, but its kicking some Squirtle Butt!
5. His Trainer is Spanish, but he had to quit him beacuse he needed to battle Team Rocket, and Edward is scared of Ekans and Arbok.
6. He is dumb, but in a good way!
That is his personality in a nutshell; good god i opend that nut!
Write your advice down there, criticisim accepted! cheers


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Re: A new encounter: Edward Da Squirtle!

Post by Mei13 on Sun Mar 22, 2015 8:28 am

It's sweet. Nothing fits here better than "sweet". (It's a compliment.)
You can extend it a bit, since not much about the character is explained. It's confusing.
But the simplicity makes it sweeter! <3
*Gets a little jealous*
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Re: A new encounter: Edward Da Squirtle!

Post by Sabre on Mon Mar 23, 2015 9:34 pm

This is so cute and very simple and a great start! I'd suggest asking around for tips on making an OC doc, then you'll have a very good character sheet you can refer to! Very Happy
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Thank you!

Post by Edward Da Squirtle on Tue Mar 24, 2015 12:50 pm

Thank you for your advice! Also, i'm making a post where i search help! Little bonus: Edward dosen't want a girlfriend, i dunno why but everytime he sees a girl, he tries to not look at her, or ignore her, i said you that he's very strange? No? Then you know it now!
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