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Hal the Trainer

Post by Cloud_the_Mighty on Tue Jun 09, 2015 6:12 pm

Name: Hal
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance:Black Hair, Black Cloak, No Shoes, Just black everything, Nothing isn't covered except for his face, which his mouth is.
Associates: None
Personality: Mysterious, Quiet, Seems to know a lot about Pokemon
Hometown: ???
Abilities: Hal can almost tell exactly what a Pokemon is saying, also is very acrobatic.
Backstory: Hal was just a young boy, around 5, when his parents was killed. He never knew how, but the day after he had found a Pokemon egg in his yard, upon him touching it it began to hatch. Inside was a baby Skarmory. Hal took care of it, in secret, since his aunt whom he lived with, disapproved Pokemon. When he was 10 he ran away, hoping to become a true trainer, but instead of becoming a trainer, Hal got lost in the woods. Hal gave up on trying to escape the woods and became a part of it's ecosystem. Hal lived there with his best friend Skarm, the Skarmory he had found years before. After seven years of living in the woods, Hal met a traveler in the woods. Hal talked with him, and decided it was time fro him to truly become a trainer.

Pokemon:
Skarm / (Skarmory)
Level: 34
Moves:
Steel Wing
Fly
Air Cutter
Agility
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by Cloud_the_Mighty on Tue Jun 09, 2015 6:13 pm

oops posted twice, this one is the real one.
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by evergreen lemose on Thu Jun 11, 2015 1:43 pm

(I'd delete the other thread)
Over all not too bad. A very obvious name for the skarmory. skarmory...
I think it's good
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by Halohbottech on Thu Jun 11, 2015 1:59 pm

This is... good. While there are some elements I see here that are quite over used (*ahem* allblackclothing, canspeaktopokemon *ahem*), all OC's have that special touch to them that makes them something to look forward to seeing more of, and yours definitely has that touch! Plus, you explain much about him that other people just leave out, which saddens me when I read their OC's. So, overally, great job man! Keep up the awesome work!

<3 from da best, Haloh~
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by evergreen lemose on Thu Jun 11, 2015 2:25 pm

What sort of things are left out?
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by Halohbottech on Thu Jun 11, 2015 2:39 pm

This isn't the place to talk about it, Swaggy. Just send me a PM, and I'll explain my reasoning.
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by Growlly on Fri Jun 12, 2015 10:47 am

I actually like this. Not like one of those boring trainer OC's where they catch a bunch of "OU" Pokemon and EV train them. This is more of a.. natural setting. I like unique OC's so bear with me. Razz

(No offense to anyone, and I don't mean to offend. If I did offend you, PM me. Smile ))
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Re: Hal the Trainer

Post by Cloud_the_Mighty on Fri Jun 12, 2015 10:49 am

Thanks for the complements Growlly Smile
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